The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.
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The table illustrates the systems of the underground railway in six different cities and gives information about the date when it opened ,
kilometres
of route and the Correct article usage
the kilometres
numbers
of passengers per year in millions.
Fix the agreement mistake
number
Overall
, it is evident that people in Tokyo use the underground railway the most. Followed by the capital of France Paris.
In detail, Japanese The number of people who utilize the public underground railwayLinking Words
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