You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
In today’s era of technology, the
migration
of workers has become a significant issue for any progressive economy. Due to
a lack of job opportunities, insufficient healthcare, and concerns about family security, many individuals are moving from one country to another. On the other hand
, some people
migrate in search of a better lifestyle and higher earnings. Year
after year
, migration
issues persist worldwide, particularly in countries like the United States, the United Kingdom, New Zealand, and Australia. These nations have implemented migration
policies aimed at curbing unwanted immigration.
However
, statistics from 2006 highlight the migrant worker rates per 1,000 people
in these countries. In 2003, the United States saw the highest migration
, with a record number of 577,000 migrants
. By 2006, the rate of migrant workers in the U.S. had dropped to 2.3 per 1,000 people
. The United Kingdom had the second-highest number of worker migrations, recording 266,000 migrants
and a ratio of 4.4 workers per 1,000 people
in 2006. Over the three-year
period, the figures for the U.S. rose to 678,000. Despite the substantial migration
in these countries, their economies continued to grow year
after year
.
According to
these figures, New Zealand experienced the lowest migration
in 2003 but had the highest rate of working migrants
per 1,000 people
. Meanwhile, Australia had the second-highest ratio of working migrants
, with 10.7 per 1,000 people
in 2006.Submitted by debasistripathy.india on
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