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The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates the proportion of household recycling rates in three countries between 2005 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that all countries increased dramatically in all periods. Observing the line in more detail, the percentage of regional households climbed in the UK slightly from around 35%% to about 55% in 2011, before it sorted gradually. Another point to be noticed to almost 60%. is that between 2005 and 20 remarkable had a Germany had rise of approximately 20%. and around 59% respectively.
In contrast
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, in the first four years France had a sharp plummet; before increasing to roughly 40%

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional household recycling rates
  • overall trend
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • fluctuations
  • marginal decline
  • notable drop
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • year-on-year growth
  • data patterns
  • rate of change
  • noteworthy milestones
  • disparities
  • environmental policies
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