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The line graph illustrates the expenditure of British citizens on four different purposes of visiting abroad (holiday, business, visiting friends or relatives and miscellaneous) from 1993 to 2013.

The line graph illustrates the expenditure of British citizens on four different purposes of visiting abroad (holiday, business, visiting friends or relatives and miscellaneous) from 1993 to 2013.
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The chart provides information about how much money British citizens spent on four different reasons
of
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for
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 visiting abroad : holiday,
business
, visiting friends or relatives and miscellaneous, from 1993 to 2013.
It is clear that
 people spent the most on holidays and the least on
micellaneous
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miscellaneous
.
Overall
, expenditure citizens spent going abroad for holiday had a wide fluctuation. It had a sharp increase from 9
billion
pounds
 in 1993 and
reaching
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reached
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 a peak in 2008 with a figure of roughly 26
billion
pounds
. It slightly decreased afterwards to 24
billion
pounds
 in 2013.
Whereas
, people spending money
for
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on
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 miscellaneous remained stable not exceeding 3
billion
pounds
.  Having a close look
in
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at
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 the graph,
amount
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the amount
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 of money people used for
business
 and visiting friends or family gradually increased.
Business
 rose from approximately 2.8
billion
pounds
 to 5
billion
pounds
 during the period.
Similarily
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Similarly
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, visiting friends or relatives climbed up steadily from 1
billion
pound
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pounds
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 to 5
billion
pounds
 which was the same amount as
business
.
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