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The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about the production and consumption of coffee in 2017 and 2018 in five coffee-exporting countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate the comparison of
sales
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 amounts of Fairtrade coffee and bananas by five
countries
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: the
UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden, in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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,
sales
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 of coffee had increased in all
countries
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 in that period,
while
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 bananas had shown slightly dropped figures in some nations.
Additionally
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, the
UK
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 marked the largest figure among the
countries
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 in 2004. Regarding the
sales
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 of Fairtrade coffee, the
UK
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 experienced a significant rise, which was over 20
times
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 from 1999 to 2004.
Consequently
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, the figure in Switzerland was enlarged twice, and it increased in all other
countries
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. When it comes to Fairtrade bananas, it
also
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 rose its
sales
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 figures in the
UK
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, Switzerland, and Denmark, over 3
times
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, 5
times
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, and 6
times
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, respectively.
In contrast
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, in Belgium and Sweden, the
sales
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 decreased by 0.8 and 1.1 million euros, respectively. The final thing to note is that both products boosted their
sales
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 in the
UK
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, even though the range of increase was different.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, countries, uk, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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