The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of both
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
who had a certificated driving license by passing the exam in one Asian country. Fix the agreement mistake
females
This
data is represented in a 10-year period
, from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
most of the women passed the driving exam more than men throughout the entire period
. While
the total number
of certificated drivers showed a gradual increase in both genders during the given period
.
To begin
with, the total number
of women who passed the driving test started with
just below 50% in 1980, followed by a slight increase to over 50% in the next ten years before surging to its peak at roughly 68% by 2000Change preposition
at
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
dropping to 63% at the end
. In comparison, Men showed a consistent rise from 28% in 1980 to just below 50% by 2000, remaining constant at the same level till the end.
In Summary, the total number
of female certificated drivers surpassed male significantly over the period
. Unfortunately, by the end, with a gradual rise in passing male drivers, its number
was just above the lowest point of the female.Submitted by sippakorn.wet on
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