The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of both
male
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and
female
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females
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who had a certificated driving license by passing the exam in one Asian country.
This
data is represented in a 10-year
period
, from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
most of the women passed the driving exam more than men throughout the entire
period
.
While
the total
number
of certificated drivers showed a gradual increase in both genders during the given
period
.
To begin
with, the total
number
of women who passed the driving test started
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just below 50% in 1980, followed by a slight increase to over 50% in the next ten years before surging to its peak at roughly 68% by 2000
,
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and
then
dropping to 63%
at the end
. In comparison, Men showed a consistent rise from 28% in 1980 to just below 50% by 2000, remaining constant at the same level till the end. In Summary, the total
number
of female certificated drivers surpassed male significantly over the
period
. Unfortunately, by the end, with a gradual rise in passing male drivers, its
number
was just above the lowest point of the female.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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