The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
The pie chart describes how many college students can speak one, or two foreign languages, or none of the others apart from their mother
language
in 2000 and 2010. In general, there were little changes after ten years. some types of
language
learners increased and others decreased.
Besides
, some situations remained the same. More students spoke Spanish in 2000 with the number of 30
percent
and it made up the most proportions among the other after 10 years with 35
percent
.
Likewise
, people who can speak "Another
language
" climbed up from 15
percent
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to 20
percent
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.
Moreover
, native speakers who can speak German or over two foreign languages took up the same figures with 10
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and they remained the same in 2010. In the case of bilingual speakers who speak French, they accounted for 15
percent
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.
However
, it decreased to 10
percent
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in 2010, and people who can not speak any foreign
language
originally comprised 20
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and
afterward
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it fell to the same number as French speakers in 2010.
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  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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