Employment should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

No doubt, we need holidays in our lives, we are not aware of why, or we cannot define reasons, but we just respond to our bodies' needs. The duration of

holiday

is usually variable between 2-4 weeks, and some countries work approximately just four weeks per year. I highly recommend

this

, because in my opinion there are 6 reasons

explains

Change the verb form

explain

show examples

why our bodies need rest and ultimately why we feel that we need to

reseat

Correct your spelling

reset

show examples

our brains.

First,

going on

holiday

usually involves

traveling

Change the spelling

travelling

show examples

. Aside from the incredible feeling of immersing yourself in a new place, eating delicious food, and meeting new friends.

Second,

having a

holiday

provides huge benefits to our

health

,

however

, you will not stick to your laptop worrying about the updates of your work.

Third,

maintaining good physical

health

,

as

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

could decrease the risk of heart disease. Fourth, improve sleep quality during the

holiday

, because when we take time away from work we get less stress and have plenty of time to sleep. Fifth, the fifth reason and the most important one is to lose weight, recently research proves that

health

and holidays go hand in hand,

besides

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

mental

health

is improved in

holiday

. Sixth, increase productivity, because the

holiday

puts you in a good mood so, you will be able to achieve and create new solving methods. In the

end

Add a comma

end,

show examples

I highly advise you to take time with your family and organize a trip, you will feel a fresh reinvigorated person.