The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph provided data on the expenditure on junk food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

This

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data reveals a clear relationship between year and consumption.

Overall

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fish

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and

chips

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and hamburgers increased dramatically over the period,

while

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pizza dropped slightly. At the beginning of

this

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period, pizza was the most common junk food,

on the other hand

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fish

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and

chips

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widespread

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were widespread

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at the end

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of the period.

It is clear that

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from

this

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line graph, hamburgers and

fish

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and

chips

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had maintained under 100 from 1970 to 1980,

fish

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and

chips

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rose significantly and

the

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peak of over 500 was reached in 1990.

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, hamburgers skyrocketed slowly around 100 in 1985 to about 300 in 1990.

On the other hand

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, pizza fell gradually until 1980 and it had maintained approximately 200.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

133 words

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The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Dicipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools.Some people think that dicipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while others think this is the role of parents. Dicuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people think that global environment problems shold be dralt with internationally. Others, however, believe that they have to be tackled domestically. What is your opinion?