The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The food that we eat
supply
the nutrients that our body needs to survive. There are three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. These are the meals typically consumed in the United States of America. There are Change the verb form
supplies
sodium
, saturated fat, and added Use synonyms
sugar
.
Use synonyms
Breakfast
, Use synonyms
lunch
, and Use synonyms
dinner
, we eat three times a day. The average Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
sodium
in Use synonyms
breakfast
is 14%, in Use synonyms
lunch
29%, in Use synonyms
dinner
43% and in Use synonyms
snacks
there is 14%. Meanwhile, the average Use synonyms
percentage
of saturated fat in our Use synonyms
breakfast
is 16%, in Use synonyms
lunch
26%, in Use synonyms
dinner
37% and in Use synonyms
snacks
21%. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, the average Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
of
added Remove the redundancy
apply
sugar
in our Use synonyms
breakfast
is 16%, in Use synonyms
lunch
19%, in Use synonyms
dinner
37% and in the Use synonyms
snacks
that we eat 42%.
In conclusion, saturated fat and added Use synonyms
sugar
have the same Use synonyms
percentage
in Use synonyms
breakfast
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
sodium
has only 14%. Use synonyms
Sodium
and saturated fat have the same Use synonyms
percentage
Use synonyms
while
added Linking Words
sugar
only has 19%. Use synonyms
In
Change preposition
At
dinner
, Use synonyms
sodium
has the highest Use synonyms
by
43%. And in Change preposition
apply
snacks
added Use synonyms
sugar
has the highest count by 42%. Remember that if we eat too much of these unhealthy nutrients, in the long term it can lead us to Use synonyms
healthy
problems Replace the word
health
such
as obesity or Linking Words
heart related
problems.Add a hyphen
heart-related
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