The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.
The graph illustrates the number
in
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of
billion
of people Fix the agreement mistake
billions
of
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in
India
and
from the year 2000 to today with Correct word choice
apply
prediction
for growth extending to 2050.
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predictions
Overall
, it is noticeable to see the decreases and increases of these two country
. During these years, Change the determiner
this two country
these two countries
India
showed very well growth, while
China
rose until half of time
and started to decline.
Looking at the graph, Add an article
the time
China
had more than 1200 in 2000, compared India
it was higher. Nowadays, Change preposition
to India
China
has over 1, 400,but it predicts that it will fall to 1,400 in 2050. On the other hand
, India
had only 1,000 which was lower in contrast
to China
. In the present days, India
soared to 1,400, however
it expects that their number will go up to 1,600 in 2050.Add a comma
however,
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