The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The pictures demonstrate the
process
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of preparing
leather
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goods
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. There are 6 main stages in the
process
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, beginning with drying the animal
skin
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and ending in
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factory
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the factory
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to prepare
totally
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it totally
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for selling.
First,
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the animal
skin
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is dried and transferred to the
factory
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.
Next,
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all the materials are washed with
water
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and
lime
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. After that, the animal
skins
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are soaked in the
Lime
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and
flattend
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flattened
by gear. In the next stage put the
skins
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in tannin which
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water
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and vegetable matter until they are soaked.
Finally
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, all the
skins
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are polished and transferred to another company to become
leather
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goods
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. The pictures illustrate the
process
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of preparing
leather
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goods
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. There are six main stages in
this
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process
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, starting with drying the animal
skin
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and ending with the final preparation in the
factory
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for sale.
First,
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the animal
skin
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is dried and
then
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transported to the
factory
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.
Next,
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the
skins
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are washed with
water
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and
lime
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. After washing, they are soaked in
lime
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and flattened by a machine. In the following stage, the
skins
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are soaked in a mixture of tannin,
water
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, and vegetable matter.
Finally
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, all the
skins
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are polished and sent to another company to be made into
leather
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goods
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, first, , next, ".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, leather, goods, skin, factory, water, lime, skins with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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