The two pie charts give information on the propotion of males and females in employment in six general categories in 1992, they divided into manual and non-manual. Manual occupation includes Craft or similar, General labourers and other manua

The two pie charts give information on the propotion of males and females in employment in six general categories in 1992, they divided into manual and non-manual. Manual occupation includes Craft or similar, General labourers and other manua
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The two graphs show the rates of the proportion of men and women in employment in six general categories in 1992; they are separated into manual and non-manual, and the manual has graft or similar, general labourers and other manuals. 
Overall
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, craft or similar in men 24% and women just 3%;
however
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, they are almost close to each other in other manual and, managerial and professional, but there is a big difference in clerical or related between them.  Starting with females, who, in the manual, have 27 per cent in other manual and just 3% craft or similar and only 1 per cent in general labourers and with collect these percentages became 31% in the manual for women, for non-manual they have 31 per cent in clerical or related and 29% in managerial and 9% in other non-manual. Men in the manual achieve 56%, which craft or simial get 24% of it and general al labourers get just 2%, and
finally
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other manual get 26%,
on the other hand
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in non-manual for males the total percentage is 48% in other non-manual and clerical or related get 6% for both and managerial and professional is 36%.
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