The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of part-time employees in four countries of the United Kingdom (
England
, Northern
Ireland
,
Scotland
and
Wales
) in the
year
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years
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1980 and 2010 respectively. The
overall
trend shown in the data was a rise in the
proportion
of employees in
England
and
Wales
,
coupled with
a decline in Northern
Ireland
and
Scotland
. a greater
proportion
of part-time workers in 2010 than in 1980. In 1980, the
England
worker's rate was about 25% ,
while
in Northern
Ireland
being
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it was
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lower than
England
's rate by approximately 10%.
Then
it
decline
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to almost ten
percent
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per cent
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in
Scotland
. the figure showed an increase
to
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about 35% in
Wales
. In 2010, the percentage of part-time workers in
England
was just over 30% and hitting a
low-point
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of about 12% in Northern
Ireland
. the figure rose to approximately 20% in
Scotland
. There was a higher
proportion
of the workers during 2010 in
wales
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Wales
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of about 35%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, england, ireland, scotland, wales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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