The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares the proportion of joblessness in three different countries from 1993 to 2007.  

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it is clear that

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in

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experienced a significant rise

while

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the

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saw a decline.

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, the EU trend indicates a consistent decrease in the unemployment rate over the period.   Looking in more detail at the proportion for

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, the

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began with 2% in 1992 and

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experienced a gradual rise in

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joblessness, which remained constant at 3% between 1995 and 1999, before a peak at roughly 6% in 2003. The

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dropped sharply, reaching 4%

at the end

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of the period. In comparison to

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, the

UK

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showed a dramatic fall from 11% in 1993 to a consistent 5% in 2001. There was a

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rise in the number of people who are without jobs in the

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, comprising 6% in 2007.

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, individuals who are out of work in the rest of Europe began

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9% and peaked at 11% before declining steadily to approximately 8%

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the given period. The

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of unemployment

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the EU was significantly higher than that in the

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,

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Japan

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