The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the decades the world has been changing significantly and individuals are concerned that their positions at
work
might shift into a situation that they do not like. Nowadays new machines and tools are invented in order to ease the tasks for people
but besides
these advancements, humans
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Although
problems have arisen as a result
of this
, there are solutions.
Examining the reasons, the most common is that modern devices are being invented by the
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is because they want to make life easier for people
but they are also
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For instance
, recently a robot called Celin had been generated in order to be used for the tasks that are done by human
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humans
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longer
people
to work
for them. Another major problem is that machines such
as,
washing machines are being replaced with human abilities. Remove the comma
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For instance
, in modern society citizens
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citizens'
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cares
are being washed with automated car washes, Correct your spelling
cars
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longer
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some thing
should be done about it.
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On the contrary
, to combat the issue, some productive steps can help to overcome to
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extent. The foremost one is that companies can offer extra courses to their employees Correct article usage
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such
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course
to improve their abilities and catch up with technology developments. Fix the agreement mistake
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Besides
that, education
government should change the subjects in schools Correct article usage
the education
according to
the
global improvement. Some subjects like introduction to artificial intelligence must be added to their timetables. These courses will build a student's base for the feature demands in Correct article usage
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work
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To conclude
, although
there are several issues due to
the work
environment shifts, however
taking steps such
as enhancing employees
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introduction conclusion present
The introduction sets up the essay topic well, highlighting the rapid changes in the work environment and their implications.
introduction conclusion present
The conclusion effectively summarises the main points discussed in the essay and reiterates the potential solutions.
complete response
You have addressed both parts of the task by discussing reasons for the changes in the work environment and suggesting ways to prepare for the future.
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