The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rate of production for the timber, pulp, and paper industries in EU countries in two decades.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the paper witnessed the most substantial change,
whereas
pulp remained relatively constant. In terms of timber, it experienced a significant decline.  Looking in more detail at the paper industry, which began
with
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2.5 in 1980 and after five years nearly doubled
with
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4.5, the number peaked at 10 in 2000, which was the highest industry product in a European country in the graph.
According to
the data, the pulp product
was fluctuated
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moderately between 4 and 6 over the given period.
In contrast
,
the
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timber production saw a steady rise from 6 to 9.5 in 1980, before falling to more than 6 in 1995,
then
rising to under 8
at the end
of the 20-year period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Production levels
  • Significant
  • Patterns
  • Comparison
  • 20-year period
  • Data
  • Forest industry products
  • Percentage
  • Amount
  • European country
  • Analysis
  • Observation
  • Graph
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