The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide the percentage of the public sector employed by dividing them into five
age
categories in the UK from 2015 to 2020.
Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion for 21 to 30 and over 50 was similar to each other in 2015, while
the former saw Correct article usage
an incease
incease
in 2020 and the latter experienced Correct your spelling
increase
increases
decline
. A Correct article usage
a decline
noteable
feature of the data is the dramatic growth in the 41 to 50 Correct your spelling
notable
noticeable
age
group, whereas
people
under 21 represented a slight rise by 2020.
Looking in more detail, in 2015 the workforce was dominated by two age
groups, 21 to 30 and over 50, at 23% of the total. Followed by people
aged 31 to 40, with 21%. The figure for individuals who are from 41 to 50 was less than 20%, finally
, the rate of people
who are under 21 years old and have jobs in the public sector was roughly 14%.
In terms to
the ratio of staff employed in 2020, the Change preposition
of
majortiy
of them Correct your spelling
majority
was
from Correct subject-verb agreement
were
21
to 30 Correct article usage
the 21
age
category, accounting 33
% of the sum. There was a sharp growth of Change preposition
for 33
people
working from age
41 to 50, comprising 28%, whereas
all other three categories had plunge
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a plunge
of
the percentage.Change preposition
in
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