The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The percentage of employed
men
and women aged 60-64 in four countries in 1970 and 2000 is shown in the chart below.
Overview, Japan seemed to have the most employed men
in the 70's. The USA had the least amount of employed men
during that time. On the other hand
, Japan also
had the biggest percentages of working women out of all countries, while
Belgium had the least amount of employed women.
Japan had about eighty-five percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
men
in employment in the 70,s
. Later Correct your spelling
70s
on
it decreased to only seventy-four Add a comma
on,
percent
. The USA and Belgium had about more thanChange the spelling
per cent
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