You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir Alland,
I am writing
this
letter to thank you for your hospitality. On 26 September, I booked your restaurant for our company celebration. I was asked by my colleagues to find a good place for the event.
Also
, I think a good restaurant would become
a good choice for Verb problem
be
this
. On the other hand
, our numbers are quite big which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
reach
200 people. That Wrong verb form
reaching
why
I Add a missing verb
is why
had
done some Wrong verb form
have
researches
Fix the agreement mistake
research
some
restaurants which can Change preposition
on some
accomodate
our members and have Correct your spelling
accommodate
the
quality on top of that.
Our sales have reached the target revenue Correct article usage
apply
therefore
we arrange
an event. Wrong verb form
are arranging
Moreover
, we have some extra resources to spend on. On top of that
our company want to make a Add a comma
that,
memoriable
moment to be remembered. It will Correct your spelling
memorable
also
increase our moral
to do better.
To be honest, I have tried some foods from your place which are very good and lingering in my mouth. Correct your spelling
morale
Moreover
, your dishes are more special on the occasion. It was very delightful, and it creates
a memorable memory for us. So, I want to thank you for Wrong verb form
created
such
good services at your restaurant.
Thank you for the hospitality, I will wait for hearing
from you soon.
Yours Change preposition
to hear
sincerly
,
StevinCorrect your spelling
sincerely
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coherence cohesion
You should begin with a more specific salutation, such as 'Dear Sir/Madam' or the manager's name if known.
coherence cohesion
Make sure the paragraphs are clearly focused on a single idea to enhance clarity. For example, separate the details of the visit, reason for the celebration, and appreciation of the food and service into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
Proofreading for minor grammatical errors, such as 'a memorable moment to be remembered' and 'Yours sincerely,' will help improve clarity.
task achievement
Avoid redundant phrases and improve sentence structure. Instead of 'To be honest, I have tried some foods from your place which are very good and lingering in my mouth,' consider 'The food I previously enjoyed from your restaurant was excellent and memorable.'
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appreciative, which is suitable for the context.
task achievement
The letter successfully covers all the required points: visit details, reason for the celebration, and what was good about the food and service.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,