The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the data on the
production
and consumption
of the
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oil
in the period of time from 1982 to 2006 in China.
Overall
, although
, in the beginning, the oil
production
was higher than its consumption
, starting from 1994, its consumption
managed to surpass. Additionally
, both the minimum and maximum were represented by the oil
consumption
, despite production
and consumption
having nearly the same position in 1982.
In 1982, the
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apply
oil
production
was higher than 2 million
of
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oil
barrels per day
, while
consumption
was equal to exactly 2 million
per day
. However
, usage of oil
stayed stable until 1990 being 2 million
barrels per day
, meanwhile, in 1986 oil
production
experienced a slight increase of 1 million
and after that stayed at this
level for several years, particularly until 1994.
In contrast
, starting from 1990, consumption
went up dramatically and peaked above 6 million
barrels per day
in 2006. At the same time, only a minimal rise was seen in the production
sector in the last
years.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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