The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph demonstrates the data on the
production
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and
consumption
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of
the
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oil
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in the period of time from 1982 to 2006 in China.
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,
although
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, in the beginning, the
oil
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production
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was higher than its
consumption
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, starting from 1994, its
consumption
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managed to surpass.
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, both the minimum and maximum were represented by the
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consumption
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, despite
production
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and
consumption
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having nearly the same position in 1982. In 1982,
the
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oil
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production
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was higher than 2
million
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oil
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barrels per
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,
while
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consumption
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was equal to exactly 2
million
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per
day
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.
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, usage of
oil
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stayed stable until 1990 being 2
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barrels per
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, meanwhile, in 1986
oil
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production
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experienced a slight increase of 1
million
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and after that stayed at
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level for several years, particularly until 1994.
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, starting from 1990,
consumption
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went up dramatically and peaked above 6
million
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barrels per
day
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in 2006. At the same time, only a minimal rise was seen in the
production
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sector in the
last
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years.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, oil, million, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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