The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart elaborates on the earnings from different types of exports for the years 2015 and 2016 and the table gives a brief account of the value
change
of each of these categories. As can be seen, the country earned the highest from Petroleum
products
and the least from Textiles.
Moreover
, save for gems and jewellery, there was an ascending resultant trend for the percentage
change
in values of all the categories. Taking petroleum
products
and engineered goods into consideration, by 2016 with $64
billion
and $63
billion
respectively,they stood at the top neck and neck.
However
, the
pertange
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portage
changes for engineering goods with an 8.5% rise
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more eye-catching as compared to petroleum
products
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showed an increase of only 3% from 2015. Next came Gems and jewellery which were the only exports to decrease. More precisely, the earnings went down 5.18% from $43
billion
to $41
billion
. Of the five export categories, Agricultural
products
and Textiles had the smallest share of them all. By 2016 with just above $32
billion
, both of them exhibited a dentical figure.
Nonetheless
, they presented dissimilar patterns of
change
within the studied period.
In other words
, Textiles with
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upward trend of 15.24% had by far the most significant
change
whereas
Agrcultral
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agricultural
products
showed
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statics below 1%.
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