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The chart show percentages of water using different sectors on Sydney,Australia in 1997 and 2007.

The chart show percentages of water using different sectors on Sydney,Australia in 1997 and 2007.
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The pie charts compare the average of
water
 used in several segments in Sydney, Australia in terms of five important categories in 1997 and 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 Australian people spent the largest proportion of their budget on just two categories, namely
food
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industry
, and manufacturing in 1997.
Moreover
, the sector on household was a gradual increase to 3% from 19% in 2007.
However
,
the
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13% of total
water
 was used
to
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 service
industry
 in 1997
then
this
 indicator increased rapidly to 12% in 2007. The highest number experienced in the figures
of
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food
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the food
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industry
 which represented 48% of the total
water
 used in 1997,
while
 in 2007, the figure for
this
 sector was only 41%.
Australian
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The Australian
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 population used the greatest amount of
water
on
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 the service
industry
. In terms of manufacturing the percentages of
water
 for both years were relatively similar, at 15% for 1997 and 11% for 2007. In both sectors, the smallest proportion of
water
 was used
on
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building
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the building
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industry
. In 1997,
this
 accounted for 5% of the total
water
 use,
while
 in 2007, the number of
water
 usage was just 2%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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