The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table depicts the difference in
proportion
of the population aged Add an article
the proportion
from
65 and above in three Change preposition
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various
regions . It is clear from the graph that the rate of population who aged above 65 reached the highest in Germany compared with other nations during the period shown Correct word choice
apply
while
the percentage of people who above 65 years ranked the lowes
in the UK . Correct your spelling
lowest
According to
what is shown . In Canada
the Add a comma
Canada,
ration
of people who has 65 Correct your spelling
ratio
year
was at 16 .32 Fix the agreement mistake
years
in1988
and will Correct your spelling
in 1988
be increase
Change the verb form
increase
to26
in 2030. Correct your spelling
to 26
On
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In
the
other Correct article usage
apply
word
, in 1988 the figure Fix the agreement mistake
words
of
individuals who had 65 Change preposition
for
about
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was about
20 .45
and will jump to 30. 42 in 2030 in Germany region Correct your spelling
20.45
while
the uk
Correct your spelling
UK
became
the Verb problem
had
lowes
rate of Correct your spelling
lowest
population
above 65 years in 1988 Add an article
the population
additionally
, there was a little difference in ratio
for people above 65 by 2000 .Correct article usage
the ratio
However
, the percentage will grow to 20.35 in 2030 .Submitted by aldossaryfaten95 on
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