The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of the Canadian workforce in five types
industries
between 1850 and 2020.
Change preposition
of industries
Overall
, as it is obviously
from the bar chart there are five Change the word
obvious
categorise
of industries Correct your spelling
categories
that
namely services, Correct pronoun usage
apply
energy
/ water
, agriculture/fishing ,construction and manufacturing in addition
the highest percentage of Canadian
workforce was services during the period 2020 Correct article usage
the Canadian
while
the lowest proportions of agriculture with fishing and energy
with water
was by 2020.
Gerenally
speaking, in 1850 the percentage of Correct your spelling
Generally
Canadian
workforce the general trend was Correct article usage
the Canadian
increase
to reach Fix the infinitive
to increase
the
high level Correct article usage
a
in
manufacturing after that the figure decreased slightly in services to Change preposition
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made
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make
per
cent Correct your spelling
per cent
then
the rate of industrial goes
down dramatically to reach more than twenty Wrong verb form
went
pre
cent Correct your spelling
per
additionally
in construction the percentage was under ten and lastly
during 1850
the figure was the lowest per Add a comma
1850,
cen
in Correct your spelling
cent
energy
with water
.
On the other hand
, in 2020 the general trend was fluctuating however
the
agriculture with fishing Correct article usage
apply
moreover
energy
with water
was 1 %.Submitted by sialamer on
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