The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organisations in 2015. Summarise the information bu selecting and reporting the main features, and make conparison where relevant.

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bar chart illustrates how much cash was invested in each

categore

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category

, from five organisations,

orgnisation

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organisations

, C, D, and

, in 2015.

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, it appears that

orgnisation

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organisation

is the highest, and both D

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and

are the lowest. Getting into more

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, A apparently put most of their money on Staff Training,

put it on Buildings, C was equal for both Machinery and Research, D on Buildings,

furthermore

same

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as D and

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around 17

Bilion

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billion

Euroes

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their maximum

investments

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division,

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the other hand, D, and

spent the same, which is only 0.5,

moreover

, A gave 1

bilion

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billion

, and for C it

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0.6 but for

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orgnisations

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organisations

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