WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart above shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
The bar chart
illustrate
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illustrates
number
of education
For man
and women between Fix the agreement mistake
men
full
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full-time
time
education
and part
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part-time
time
education
in Britian
from 1970 to 1990. As can be seen, In Correct your spelling
Britain
full
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full-time
time
education
get
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gets
a
highest Change the article
the
number
over three years.whil
, in the Correct your spelling
while
Part
Add a hyphen
Part-time
time
Correct your spelling
education
deducation
has Add the comma(s)
deducation,
Less
Points.
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Fewer
It is clear that
,
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apply
In
Change preposition
apply
male
Fix the agreement mistake
males
were fluctuate
in numbers. In 1970/71 Wrong verb form
fluctuated
thir
Correct your spelling
their
is
increased to 1000, It Correct your spelling
it
were
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was
a
highest Change the article
the
number
. whil
, in 1980/81 it Correct your spelling
while
were
decreased in to higher than 800 werd Change the verb form
was
Less
points. Change the quantifier
Fewer
However
, in 1990/91 number
of Correct article usage
the number
full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
education
grow to nerly
900. Correct your spelling
nearly
In addition
, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
Part
Add a hyphen
Part-time
time
minise in
1970/71 to 1990/91 Change preposition
from
rise
from 1 to 200 Replace the word
rose
person
.
Fix the agreement mistake
people
on the other hand
, In Female
were Fix the agreement mistake
Females
climb
gradually. In 1970 were Wrong verb form
climbing
number
of Correct article usage
the number
full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
education
around 700. whil
, in 1980 go up to under 800. Correct your spelling
while
However
, thir
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there
were
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was
a
highest Change the article
the
people
in 1990 around 1100 . Correct quantifier usage
number of people
Moreover
, in Part
time
. education
thir
were
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was
nerly
same Correct your spelling
nearly
number
in 1980 and 1990. whil
, In 1970 were Less Point around 1.
Correct your spelling
while
To sum up
, we could say that full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
education
thir
Correct your spelling
their
were
increased over the years Change the verb form
was
whil
Correct your spelling
while
in
Change preposition
apply
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
education
were
decreased.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, education, time, part, whil, thir with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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