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The bar graph illustrates the frequency of eating at fast food restaurants amongst Americans between 2003 and 2013. Overall, most Americans eat at those restaurants between once a week to twice a month. Looking in closer detail at the chart, it can be observed that just over 30 % of people in USA used to eat in fast foods once a week whilst 30% used to eat in fast food once or twice a week. A minority of people never consumed fast food neither consumed it daily .In 2006, a slight increase in the frequency of once week can be noticed. At the same time, the percentage of several times a week consumers growth moving from around 16% to exactly 20%; as well as the feature of once or twice a month . Furthermore, there were still few people, approximatively 3%, who were daily fast-food customers. Finally, in 2013, about 33% of people used to eat fast food once or twice a month and still a tiny portion of individuals used to purchase fast foods every day or never.

The bar graph illustrates the frequency of eating at fast food restaurants amongst Americans between 2003 and 2013. Overall, most Americans eat at those restaurants between once a week to twice a month. Looking in closer detail at the chart, it can be observed that just over 30 % of people in USA used to eat in fast foods once a week whilst 30% used to eat in fast food once or twice a week. A minority of people never consumed fast food neither consumed it daily .In 2006, a slight increase in the frequency of once week can be noticed. At the same time, the percentage of several times a week consumers growth moving from around 16% to exactly 20%; as well as the feature of once or twice a month . Furthermore, there were still few people, approximatively 3%, who were daily fast-food customers. Finally, in 2013, about 33% of people used to eat fast food once or twice a month and still a tiny portion of individuals used to purchase fast foods every day or never.
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The bar graph illustrates the frequency of eating at fast
food
 restaurants
amongst
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among
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 Americans between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, most Americans eat at those restaurants between once a
week
 to twice a month. Looking in closer detail at the chart, it can be observed that just over 30 % of
people
 in
USA
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the USA
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 used to eat
in
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apply
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fast
foods
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food
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 once a
week
 whilst 30% used to eat
in
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apply
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fast
food
 once or twice a
week
. A minority of
people
 never consumed fast
food
neither
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nor
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 consumed it daily .In 2006, a slight increase in the frequency of once
week
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a week
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 can be noticed. At the same time, the percentage of several times
a
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a-week
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week
 consumers growth moving from around 16% to exactly 20%;
as well as
 the feature of once or twice a month .
Furthermore
, there were still
few
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a few
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people
,
approximatively
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 3%, who were daily fast-
food
 customers.
Finally
, in 2013, about 33% of
people
 used to eat fast
food
 once or twice a month and still a tiny portion of individuals used to purchase fast
foods
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food
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 every day or never.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, week, people with synonyms.
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