The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrations demonstrate the life
process
of the silkworm and the phases in the manufacture of silk
material.
Overall
, the life cycle is a natural process
consisting of four cyclical phases, beginning with the moth laying eggs and ending with the birth of a new moth from a cocoon. The production of silk
cloth is a rather man-made linear process
entailing 6 stages.
To start with, the moth lays eggs which take 10 days to hatch into silkworm larvae that feed on mulberry leaves. This
is followed by a period of 4 to 6 weeks where the worms contruct
Correct your spelling
construct
contract
silk
thread before forming a cocoon taking approximately a week. They stay there around
a fortnight, Change preposition
for around
subsequently
emerging as new moths and the process
repeats itself.
The first stage in the manufacture of silk
cloth is the selection of cocoon which is then
boiled. After that, the silk
thread is unwound upto
a length between 300 and 900 metres. Correct your spelling
up to
Finally
, the thread is then
twisted or woven before being dyed.Submitted by man3meet4 on
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