The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrations demonstrate the life
process
of the silkworm and the phases in the manufacture of Use synonyms
silk
material.
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Overall
, the life cycle is a natural Linking Words
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consisting of four cyclical phases, beginning with the moth laying eggs and ending with the birth of a new moth from a cocoon. The production of Use synonyms
silk
cloth is a rather man-made linear Use synonyms
process
entailing 6 stages.
To start with, the moth lays eggs which take 10 days to hatch into silkworm larvae that feed on mulberry leaves. Use synonyms
This
is followed by a period of 4 to 6 weeks where the worms Linking Words
contruct
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construct
contract
silk
thread before forming a cocoon taking approximately a week. They stay there Use synonyms
around
a fortnight, Change preposition
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subsequently
emerging as new moths and the Linking Words
process
repeats itself.
The first stage in the manufacture of Use synonyms
silk
cloth is the selection of cocoon which is Use synonyms
then
boiled. After that, the Linking Words
silk
thread is unwound Use synonyms
upto
a length between 300 and 900 metres. Correct your spelling
up to
Finally
, the thread is Linking Words
then
twisted or woven before being dyed.Linking Words
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