The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The pie charts illustrate the different
proportions
of five categories of
energy
production
in
France
between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
proportions
of all categories of
energy
production
in
France
increased except petrol
energy
. Remarkably, the figures for gas and coal were similar which was the highest proportion. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in 1995 the
proportions
of coal, gas, and petrol
energy
production
were similar to each other, with about 29% of the total,
by contrast
, these figures for nuclear and other
energy
were only from 4% to 6,5%.
At the end
of the period, after growing by about 1%, the
proportions
of coal and gas
energy
production
in
France
still situated at the top
while
the figure for petrol
energy
reduced to about 20% and ranked third.
Finally
, the
proportions
of nuclear and other
energy
production
in
France
increased to about 10% and 9%, respectively.
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