The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
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The pie charts illustrate the different
proportions
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of five categories of
energy
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production
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in
France
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between 1995 and 2005.
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,
it is clear that
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the
proportions
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of all categories of
energy
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production
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in
France
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increased except petrol
energy
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. Remarkably, the figures for gas and coal were similar which was the highest proportion. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in 1995 the
proportions
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of coal, gas, and petrol
energy
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production
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were similar to each other, with about 29% of the total,
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, these figures for nuclear and other
energy
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were only from 4% to 6,5%.
At the end
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of the period, after growing by about 1%, the
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of coal and gas
energy
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production
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in
France
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still situated at the top
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the figure for petrol
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reduced to about 20% and ranked third.
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, the
proportions
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of nuclear and other
energy
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production
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in
France
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increased to about 10% and 9%, respectively.
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