You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Value changes in UK steel industry 1970-2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The given two charts indicate the fluctuation in values and employment status in the UK’s

steel

manufacturing between 1970 and 2000. The initial impression from the chart is that the demand and production of

steel

underwent drastic downturns ,

while

the import one rose constantly.

In addition

, the trend of people working in the

steel

industry declined. In 1970 , over 160,000 million

tones

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of

steel

came from UK production

while

the total UK demand started at 200,000.Over the 20-year period , the figure for demand decreased

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level of approximately 110,000 , before declining slightly to nearly 100,000.In the same timeframe , the production dropped to 90,000 ,

then

there was a slight decrease to 80,000 in 10 years.

In contrast

,

steel

import

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imports

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reached at bottom of around 5,000 and increased gradually to around 75,000 over the following

of

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30 years. With regard to the second chart ,in 1970, the employment status was relatively high , sitting at approximately 50,000.

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the figure for people who pursued jobs in the

steel

industry began to decline.By 1980 , it dropped to nearly 40.000 and halved year-on-year.

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the end of the period , employment status was around 15,000.