The pie chart shows the percentage of males and females arrested in the UK from 2015- 2020 and the bar chart shows the reasons for these people's arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart shows the percentage of males and females arrested in the UK from 2015- 2020 and the bar chart shows the reasons for these people's arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs illustrate The proportion of both genders who

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committed

commited

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committed

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apply

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crime

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crimes

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arrested in British in six categories, drinking driving, public intoxication, breaking and

endtering

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entering

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assault

assult

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assault

, theft and

other

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others

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over the period from 2015 to 2020

Overall

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, From the first graph,

Firstly

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, It can be seen that

Mens

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men

are captured by police more than

Womens

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women

. The proportion of arresting

man

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men

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was around

roungly

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roughly

three times more than arresting

women

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besides

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, In some categories,

Women

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are

catched

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caught

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cop

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cops

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more than men. Looking at the graph more closely, It can be seen that 91

percent

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per cent

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women

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had not

arrested

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been arrested

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yet throughout the period.

Nevertheless

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, The

Women

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commiting

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committing

to public intoxication and assault

arrested

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were arrested

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more than men, even the highest rate of arrest ,

comparing

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to others in both groups, accounted for almost 40

percent

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per cent

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On the other hand

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, The

arrsting

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arresting

rate in all categories except public intoxication

were

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was

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roughly equal to each

others

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other

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at around 20

percent

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per cent

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in both

women

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and men.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

161 words

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