The pie chart shows the percentage of males and females arrested in the UK from 2015- 2020 and the bar chart shows the reasons for these people's arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of males and females arrested in the UK from 2015- 2020 and the bar chart shows the reasons for these people's arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate The proportion of both genders who
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committed
commited
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committed
to
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crime
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crimes
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arrested in British in six categories, drinking driving, public intoxication, breaking and
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entering
,
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assault
assult
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assault
, theft and
other
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others
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over the period from 2015 to 2020
Overall
, From the first graph,
Firstly
, It can be seen that
Mens
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men
are captured by police more than
Womens
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women
. The proportion of arresting
man
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men
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was around
roungly
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roughly
three times more than arresting
women
.
besides
, In some categories,
Women
are
catched
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caught
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by
cop
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cops
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more than men. Looking at the graph more closely, It can be seen that 91
percent
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per cent
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of
women
had not
arrested
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been arrested
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yet throughout the period.
Nevertheless
, The
Women
commiting
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committing
to public intoxication and assault
arrested
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were arrested
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more than men, even the highest rate of arrest ,
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compared
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to others in both groups, accounted for almost 40
percent
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.
On the other hand
, The
arrsting
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arresting
rate in all categories except public intoxication
were
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was
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roughly equal to each
others
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other
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at around 20
percent
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per cent
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in both
women
and men.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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