The pie chart shows the percentage of males and females arrested in the UK from 2015- 2020 and the bar chart shows the reasons for these people's arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide key information about people who got arrested in the UK between 2015 and 2020. The units are measured in numbers.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the males
led the number of arrested people by 32%. In addition
, males
who are not arrested are 68%, whereas
the females are less than the guys by 31% more.
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