The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart below illustrates the distribution of free
time
based on gender and employment between 1980 and 1981. It is clearly seen that the leisure time
never exceeded 85 and not below 38 overall
categories .
First, we can notice full-time
time
employees have the lowest free time
among others due to
their nine hours of working weekly and don't haveCorrect your spelling
much
such
time
for fun . Also
, part-time
working females reached 40 of spare time
which was almost the same as full-time
. Second , unemployed and retired were the group that had such
time
for Gym, swimming, and reading and reached the highest that it had ever been. Last
but not least , the most interesting fact is that housewives only had 50 enjoyable times which is higher by 10 compared to full and part-time
females.
To sum up
, full and part-time
time
workers had the lowest time
to spend on themself than others.Submitted by no123fm on
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