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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides data on the amount of spare
time
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 that females and males of various employment statuses had in 1998-1999.
Overall
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, unemployed and retired individuals of both genders have more leisure
time
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in contrast
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 with others.
In addition
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, there were no part-
time
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 working
men
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 in that period of
time
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as well as
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 househusbands. To start,
while
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men
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 who work full
time
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 had approximately 50
hours
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 of leisure
time
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 in a week, women belonging to the same category had only below 40
hours
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. Part-
time
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 women employees had a spare
time
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 of 40
hours
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,
however
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, information about
men
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 was missing. Unemployed
men
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 and women had much spare
time
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, particularly about 85
hours
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 and almost 80
hours
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 respectively. The same trend was observed in the amount of free
time
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 that retired humans had as males had roughly 85
hours
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 and females had nearly 80
hours
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 a week. Turning to housewives, the figure constituted around 60
hours
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 in a week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure time
  • employment status
  • full-time employment
  • part-time employment
  • unemployed
  • retired
  • housewives
  • gender comparison
  • notable differences
  • allocate time
  • trend analysis
  • work-life balance
  • time management
  • societal norms
  • economic factors
  • gender-specific trends
  • employment transition
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