The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. as

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in rented and owned housing in England and Wales in a period of thirty years.

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, the percentage of

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renting

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significantly declined than owning over the period shown. In 1918 the percentage of

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renting

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in England and Wales was respectively 75% which was the highest proportion

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owning was 25% which was the lowest one. Until 1971 percentage of

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were in the same state as was before,

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after some time rented housing gradually declined

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owned

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increased. In the middle of

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renting and owning were 50% either. Afterwards between 1981 to 2011 years

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slightly

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almost

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70%.

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by these times rented

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30% and got bigger to 35% by 2011.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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5 paragraphs

133 words

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