The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. as
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The picture below illustrates the proportion of
household
in rented and owned housing in England and Wales in a period of thirty years.
Fix the agreement mistake
households
Overall
, the percentage of households
in
renting Change preposition
apply
accommodation
significantly declined than owning over the period shown.
In 1918 the percentage of households
renting accommodation
in England and Wales was respectively 75% which was the highest proportion whereas
owning was 25% which was the lowest one. Until 1971 percentage of households
were in the same state as was before, however
after some time rented housing gradually declined although
owned accommodation
increased. In the middle of Correct article usage
the periods
periods
renting and owning were 50% either.
Afterwards between 1981 to 2011 years Fix the agreement mistake
period
households
in owning
slightly Wrong verb form
owned
grow
Wrong verb form
grew
almost
70%.
Change preposition
by almost
However
by these times rented Add a comma
However,
accommodation
decreased until
30% and got bigger to 35% by 2011.Change preposition
to
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