The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of skill cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of skill cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two diagrams illustrating the
silkworm
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life cycle and the five phases involved in
silk
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cloth production. As shown in the
silkworm
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life cycle graphic, the first stage is the moth leaves its eggs on the leaf,
secondly
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, after 10 days, the eggs become
silkworm
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larvae and eat mulberry leaves as food sources, the following
step
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, after 4 to 6 weeks, the larva makes
silk
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thread and live in there, the fourth stage, after 3 to 8 days, the
silk
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thread turn into the
cocoon
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,
finally
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, after 16 days, the worm breaks out of the
cocoon
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and turns into a moth,
that is
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the life cycle of the
silkworm
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. Another picture gives information about the production of
silk
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cloth, at
the first
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step
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is to select a
cocoon
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,
the next
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step
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is to boil it in water, the third
step
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is to unwind the boiled
cocoon
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into threads lengths of 300 to 900 meters, and the fourth
step
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os twists the threads, and the
last
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step
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, weaves the twisted threads as
silk
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cloth,
besides
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, in these
last
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two steps, you can dye it to any colour you want.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words silkworm, silk, step, cocoon with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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