The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of skill cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two diagrams illustrating the
silkworm
life cycle and the five phases involved in Use synonyms
silk
cloth production.
As shown in the Use synonyms
silkworm
life cycle graphic, the first stage is the moth leaves its eggs on the leaf, Use synonyms
secondly
, after 10 days, the eggs become Linking Words
silkworm
larvae and eat mulberry leaves as food sources, the following Use synonyms
step
, after 4 to 6 weeks, the larva makes Use synonyms
silk
thread and live in there, the fourth stage, after 3 to 8 days, the Use synonyms
silk
thread turn into the Use synonyms
cocoon
, Use synonyms
finally
, after 16 days, the worm breaks out of the Linking Words
cocoon
and turns into a moth, Use synonyms
that is
the life cycle of the Linking Words
silkworm
.
Another picture gives information about the production of Use synonyms
silk
cloth, at Use synonyms
the first
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step
is to select a Use synonyms
cocoon
, Use synonyms
the next
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step
is to boil it in water, the third Use synonyms
step
is to unwind the boiled Use synonyms
cocoon
into threads lengths of 300 to 900 meters, and the fourth Use synonyms
step
os twists the threads, and the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
step
, weaves the twisted threads as Use synonyms
silk
cloth, Use synonyms
besides
, in these Linking Words
last
two steps, you can dye it to any colour you want.Linking Words
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