Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion. nb

The pie chart compares methods of transportation for people travelling to university to work or study and shows their

percentage

from 2004 to 2009. Over the period shown,

pie

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the pie

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chart demonstrates that every

percentage

of

category

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the category

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expect

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except

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car

were

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was

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increased and used more than the

car

.

Overall

,

at

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in

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2009

that

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apply

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the proportion of walking,

ride

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riding

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on

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the bus

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bus

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buses

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,

train

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trains

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and cycling grew, but

percentage

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the percentage

a percentage

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of driving

car

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cars

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were became

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became

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less than it was.

Also

, it meant

what

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that

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from 2009 more

student

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students

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/

teacher

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teachers

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preferred walking,

ride

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riding

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on

bus

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buses

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,

train

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trains

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and cycling and more than half of them refused to

drove

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drive

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the

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a

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car

.

However

,

percentage

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the percentage

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of

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the car

a car

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car

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cars

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in 2009

is

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was

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way bigger than cycling,

train

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training

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and walking even if they were

equaled

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equalled

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.

Moreover

,

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the proportional

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proportional

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proportion

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of driving

car

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cars

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in 2004 was the biggest in

compare

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comparison

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with other categories.

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, in 2004 methods of transportation like walking, riding on bus,

train

and cycling

was

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were

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lower than

car

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a car

the car

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for

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by

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3 per cent if they were

equaled

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equalled

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in one.