Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion. nb
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The pie chart compares methods of transportation for people travelling to university to work or study and shows their
percentage
from 2004 to 2009.
Over the period shown, pie
chart demonstrates that every Correct article usage
the pie
percentage
of category
Correct article usage
the category
expect
Correct your spelling
except
car
were
increased and used more than the Change the verb form
was
car
.
Overall
, at
2009 Change preposition
in
that
the proportion of walking, Correct word choice
apply
ride
on Wrong verb form
riding
Correct article usage
the bus
bus
, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
and cycling grew, but Fix the agreement mistake
trains
percentage
of driving Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
were became
less than it was. Change the verb form
became
Also
, it meant what
from 2009 more Correct word choice
that
student
/Fix the agreement mistake
students
teacher
preferred walking, Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
ride
on Wrong verb form
riding
bus
, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
and cycling and more than half of them refused to Fix the agreement mistake
trains
drove
Wrong verb form
drive
the
Correct article usage
a
car
. However
, percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
Add an article
the car
a car
car
in 2009 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
is
way bigger than cycling, Wrong verb form
was
train
and walking even if they were Wrong verb form
training
equaled
.
Change the spelling
equalled
Moreover
, Correct article usage
the proportional
proportional
of driving Replace the word
proportion
car
in 2004 was the biggest in Fix the agreement mistake
cars
compare
with other categories. Replace the word
comparison
For example
, in 2004 methods of transportation like walking, riding on bus, train
and cycling was
lower than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
car
Add an article
a car
the car
for
3 per cent if they were Change preposition
by
equaled
in one.Change the spelling
equalled
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, car, train with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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