Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion. af
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The pie chart gives information about methods of transportation for
paeople
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people
traveling
to university in 2004 and 2009 in the UK
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travelling
Overall
there are two year
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years
where
, how people Correct word choice
when
could
travel to their location. Wrong verb form
can
For
example
it is how the Add a comma
example,
percentage
was increased or decreased.
The
first Change preposition
In the
year
the people
who Correct quantifier usage
number of people
walking
was 4 per Wrong verb form
walked
cent
. Actually, the
second Change preposition
in the
year
the percentage
was
decreased. Unnecessary verb
apply
That
is mean
that the transport user is decreased. Wrong verb form
means
The next step is
transportation. In 2004 car categories was
51 per Correct subject-verb agreement
were
cent
. So this
is the bigger
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biggest
percentage
in
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apply
this
year
. Bus proportion was more than bicycle and trian
. The smallest transport proportion Correct your spelling
train
was train
. It is 3 per Change the verb form
was trained
was training
cent
. That is
because car user
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users
was
the highest Verb problem
had
percentage
.
Just walking process was less than the
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apply
last
year
. Also
cars proportion too. Over the time period shown year
’s bus categories were more that
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than
tye
others and the 2004 Correct your spelling
the
year
. Bus percentage
was 46 per cent
and they are increased in the 2004 year
. That is
because the transport user was lowest. Because the car or train’s prise
was the highest one.Correct your spelling
price
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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