The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The illustration depicts the portion of four countries'
export
in Australia in the span of 22 Fix the agreement mistake
exports
years
; from 1990 to 2012. China has the increasing trend
number of export
, Fix the agreement mistake
exports
while
India
almost consistently gained the lowest.
To begin
with, among the four nations, China started as the lowest exporter with less than 5% second to India
in the starting year
with about a percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, it showed an upward trend
every five years
and skyrocketed to 30% on its last
year
, which is more than a quarter from the first year
. Although
China experienced an upward trend
, it was evident that Japan has
the highest portion out of the other nations in the beginning Wrong verb form
had
year
with more than 25%, but dramatically plumetted
for the next Correct your spelling
plummeted
years
with less than a fifth in year
2012. Change the article
the year
Same
goes Correct article usage
The same
to
Change preposition
for
US
, where in the first Correct article usage
the US
year
has one in ten. Then
slightly dropped to less than 10% after five years
, and recovered to same
starting number. Despite the rise, it still sank to following Add an article
the same
years
until the last
year
with more than one in twenty, which is a
half on its starting Change the article
apply
year
.
On the other hand
, India
has the lowest recorded export as evidenced on
the starting Change preposition
in
year
with barely a percent
. ThoughChange the spelling
per cent
,
it showed a slight increase Remove the comma
apply
to
its Change preposition
in
trend
, the other three countries dominates
over Change the verb form
dominate
than
Change preposition
apply
India
. It peaked just in year
2010 with fairly more than 5%.Change the article
the year
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