You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter .Describe the item you left behind .Say why it is important to you .Explain what you would like the airline manager to do Write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir or madam Hope you are doing great . I would like to bring a concern to you about my handbag left in the airline.

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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

night ,I landed in Alberta and took the flight from Toronto at 09:30pm.When I arrived home found that I left the

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handbag

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on the plane . It's a black coach duffle bag with

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Ipad

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and hard drive really important for me because of all of my office files. Can you please have a look and if you find please return it to the lost and found department.

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,there are some cosmetics too in the bag. I would really appreciate your help and eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely Jashanpreet

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Add a brief closing statement, such as a call to action or thank you.

coherence cohesion

Improve paragraph division for better readability.

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Clear description of the item left behind and its importance.

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Polite and formal tone is maintained throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear beginning and closing.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

117 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable item
left behind
overhead compartment
flight attended
identifiable features
lost and found
retrieve
significant
service provided
correspondence
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