You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The data displays how mobile and landline phone was subscribed per hundred citizens in four nations from 2005 to 2015. Mobile subscriptions in Uruguay and India show
overall
increase, Add an article
an overall
while
UK
and Eritrea Correct article usage
the UK
remain
constant over the decade. Wrong verb form
remained
On the other hand
, fixed telephone subscriber
in four regions are relatively Fix the agreement mistake
subscribers
same
every year.
Correct article usage
the same
Firstly
, UK’s
Correct article usage
the UK’s
subscriber
slightly rose up Fix the agreement mistake
subscribers
before
in 2007 Change preposition
apply
Correct word choice
and become
become
stagnant until 2015. Eritrea Wrong verb form
became
also
showed relative stagnancy around 125 over 10-year
period starting from 2005. Meanwhile, India and Uruguay displayed Add an article
a 10-year
increase
, peaked up to about 150 in 2013 and around 80 in 2014, respectively.
Correct article usage
an increase
Conversely
, the number of people subscribed fixed
Change preposition
to fixed
phone
are comprehensively lower than mobile phone users, which is only about 60 Fix the agreement mistake
phones
belonged
to Wrong verb form
belonging
UK
, and reduced to just above 50 in 2015. The number of Correct article usage
the UK
subscriber
in Uruguay occurred Fix the agreement mistake
subscribers
slight
decrease until 2011, and Correct article usage
a slight
small
escalation until 2015, reached up to above 30. Correct article usage
a small
However
, Eritrea and India are
relatively constant from 2005 to 2015, Wrong verb form
were
ranged
about 0 – 5.Wrong verb form
ranging
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