The chart below shows the promotions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. Summarise and write the information in about 150 words making relevant comparisons
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The pie charts depict the share of British students at
a
English university in England that were capable of speaking other languages Change the article
an
as well as
English in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, the ratio of speakers who speak Spanish only and another language
had an upward trend, whereas
multilingual speakers and German
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the German
language
group stabilised at the same level. Unlikely, people who were able to speak French only, in addition
to English and could not speak any other language
declined gradually.
To begin
with, the proportion of Spanish
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the Spanish
only
group was two times bigger than Correct word choice
apply
another
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that of other
language
speakers, according for
30% and 15% respectively in 2000. These groups followed the same pattern, Change preposition
to
increased
gradually for 5 per cent , standing at 35% and 20% Wrong verb form
increasing
accordingly
in 2004.
While
multilingual humans and German only group levelled off at 10 per cent in both years, no other language
and French only
groups were higher than these students, plateauing at 20% and 15% in order in 2000. Add a hyphen
French-only
Likewise
, the proportions dropped noticeably to the same amount (10%) in the next year.Submitted by novruzluahmed2007 on
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