You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: say what experience you have ask what the work involves enquire about work conditions
I saw your advertisement, and I am writing to inquire about getting a part-time job at the hotel for three months
during
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apply
this
summer. My name Pramod
, and I am a university student, seeking a part-time job to pay the next Add a missing verb
is Pramod
semester
fees.
In terms of experience, I have 6 Change noun form
semester's
moths
of experience as a cashier at a grocery store. I was Correct your spelling
months
resposible
for managing cash, solving the Correct your spelling
responsible
customers
problems and selling the products.
I would like to know about roles and responsibilities related to the job title. Change to a genitive case
customer's
customers'
Also
if any certifications required
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are required
then
I would be happy to aquire
them. Correct your spelling
acquire
Moreover
, is there any specific uniform required? If so I would like to get more details of it.
Additionally
, I would like to know more about working
environment at the hotel Correct article usage
the working
such
as staff behaviour, health and safety precoutions
and Correct your spelling
precautions
nature
of the work.
Thank you for your time and waiting for your Correct article usage
the nature
responce
.
Yours sincerely,
PramodCorrect your spelling
response
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Ensure that there is a clear and consistent focus within each paragraph, possibly separating inquiries about job details and work conditions.
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Make sure to check for minor spelling errors, such as 'moths' to 'months,' and 'resposible' to 'responsible.'
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The letter begins with an effective introduction, clearly stating the purpose of the letter and your reason for applying.
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The queries about job roles and working conditions reflect a good understanding of what information is required.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.