You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: say what experience you have ask what the work involves enquire about work conditions

I saw your advertisement, and I am writing to inquire about getting a part-time job at the hotel for three months
during
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this
summer. My name
Pramod
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is Pramod
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, and I am a university student, seeking a part-time job to pay the next
semester
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fees. In terms of experience, I have 6
moths
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months
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of experience as a cashier at a grocery store. I was
resposible
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responsible
for managing cash, solving the
customers
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problems and selling the products. I would like to know about roles and responsibilities related to the job title.
Also
if any certifications
required
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then
I would be happy to
aquire
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acquire
them.
Moreover
, is there any specific uniform required? If so I would like to get more details of it.
Additionally
, I would like to know more about
working
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environment at the hotel
such
as staff behaviour, health and safety
precoutions
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precautions
and
nature
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of the work. Thank you for your time and waiting for your
responce
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response
. Yours sincerely, Pramod
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that there is a clear and consistent focus within each paragraph, possibly separating inquiries about job details and work conditions.
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Make sure to check for minor spelling errors, such as 'moths' to 'months,' and 'resposible' to 'responsible.'
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The letter begins with an effective introduction, clearly stating the purpose of the letter and your reason for applying.
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The queries about job roles and working conditions reflect a good understanding of what information is required.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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