The bar chart shows the amount of tea and coffee imported in Canada, UK, the USA, and Germany

The bar chart shows the amount of tea and coffee imported in Canada, UK, the USA, and Germany
The bar chart provides information about the figures for imported
tea
and
coffee
that took place in Canada, the
UK
, the USA, and Germany in the year 2007 by
tonnes
.
Overall
, at first glance, imported
tea
in the
UK
experienced an upward trend
while
coffee
showed a downward trend during the period.
Tea
is considered the most common of imported in the
UK
13000
tonnes
. At the same time, the USA ranked in the second position in imported
tea
about 9000
tonnes
. Canada and Germany had the lowest imports of
tea
approximately 4000 and 6000
tonnes
respectively.
In contrast
, imported
coffee
in Canada and the USA was the highest compared to other countries.
However
, the
UK
and Germany showed up decline in imported
coffee
to almost 7000 and 5000
tonnes
.
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