Some people The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparson

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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of UK

students

in one university who could speak foreign

languages

in addition

to their mother tongue in the years 2000 and 2010.

Overall

, the most popular language among the British

students

was Spanish

while

the least common was German and the other two

languages

. Another noticeable feature is that after ten years the proportion of

students

who chose

languages

decreased to one in ten except for Spanish. To start with, the percentage of

students

who only opted for Spanish was 30% in 2000

then

slightly grew to 35%. Followed by those who chose another language, making up 15%

then

rose to 20% at the same time period. Figures for

students

who speak no other

languages

halved from 20% to 20% respectively. Regarding the share of

students

with lower percentages, those who only knew French was 15% in 2000

then

dipped to 5%, constituting one in ten in 2010. The proportion of

students

who opted for only German and the other two

languages

remained steady (10%) throughout the analyzed period.

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