A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: oexplain what you are currently doing odescribe your suitability for this area of work osay when you can attend an interview.

Dear sir, I am writing
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letter to inform you that I am very much interested
to apply
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for the job which you posted
last
week in the local
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. I work as a team leader in a reputed organization
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more popular in
this
country since 2016. I have a degree in Management and I have 8 years of experience as a manager and
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other
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have sufficient knowledge and experience to place me in
this
post. if you hire me as
manager
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to
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your company it will be
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selection because my knowledge and experience will be useful and valuable. I have done
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research which is very important to an organisation to overcome
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financial and
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infrastructure
troubles and the research which I did will help your company to gain more than your current profit. I will not be available
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weekdays so if you wish to invite me for the interview arrange the interview at
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morning
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the morning
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8
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am to 11 am. I hope that you will consider my request and do the needful to take
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action in
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regard. thanking you yours faithfully
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single, clear idea to improve organization and readability.
Task Achievement
The letter should directly address the role of a waiter or waitress, emphasizing relevant skills and experience.
Task Achievement
Maintain a consistent formal tone; for example, use 'Thank you' instead of 'thanking you.'
Task Achievement
The letter contains a polite and respectful tone throughout, especially in expressing interest in the job opportunity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter is structured in a logical order, moving from interest in the position to personal qualifications and availability.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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