The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

The pie charts illustrate the changes in contribution to the economy from eight different

sectors

(construction, manufacturing, utilities and transportation, healthcare and education, finance, leisure and hospitality, government, and

agriculture

) for

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Turkey in two different

years

(2000 and 2016).

Overall

,

agriculture

comprised

of

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the main sector which contributed in

first

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year,

whereas

in the second year accounted for healthcare and education. There was a slight

dropped

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in contribution from

agriculture

, leisure and hospitality, and government, but

on the other hand

sectors

such

as construction, manufacturing, utilities and transportation, and finance climbed. The amount of contribution by construction

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economy of Turkey was less than 5% in 2000,

then

grew up

until

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10% by 2016.

Sectors

such

as manufacturing, utilities and transportation, and finance went up

at

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two

years

. The merit of

agriculture

had been quarter in 2000 and went down to a little over

than

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10% by 2016.

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leisure and hospitality and government

sectors

slightly declined in these

years

,

while

the healthcare and education remained constant in both

years

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bit more than 15%.