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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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 table
illustrate
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about
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global
water
 use by
sector
although
 the table
show
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shows
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 that
brazil
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Brazil
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 population is 176 million and
on the other hand
 democratic republic of
cogo
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Cogo
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 population is 5.2 million .
however
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 calculation of numbers was standing for the year
of
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2000 ,
furthermore
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 the Irrigated land
show
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 the land of
brazil
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Brazil
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 with 26,500 km and for the republic
congo
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Congo
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 100 km .
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marvelous
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standers
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 of landscapes that will
stands
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 for any type of
water
sector
gobaly
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globally
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hand
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 the
water
 consumption per person of
brazil
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Brazil
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 is 359 m and the
democartic
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democratic
republic
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Republic
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 of
congo
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Congo
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 is 8 m , the
inurmous
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enormous
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ginormous
 years that went through starting from 1990 less than 1000 was
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agriculture
acgriculture
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agriculture considered highest
considerd
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considered
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highst
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highest
 of the
water
sector
 followed by industrial use and
lastely
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lately
 domestic use in
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conclusion
that
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the
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 global
water
sector
 could give
and
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inurmose
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purpose
 and remarkable results with time and year increase as the graph
show
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, saving
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world
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 wild plant
water
 will
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considered
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as
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form
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for
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humanity
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 wishing more
sprede
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spread
golbaly
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globally
 of
saveings
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savings
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, sector with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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