The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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brazil
population is 176 million and Capitalize word
Brazil
on the other hand
democratic republic of cogo
population is 5.2 million .
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Cogo
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brazil
with 26,500 km and for the republic Capitalize word
Brazil
congo
100 km . Capitalize word
Congo
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of landscapes that will Correct your spelling
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water
sector
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water
consumption per person of brazil
is 359 m and the Capitalize word
Brazil
democartic
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democratic
republic
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Republic
congo
is 8 m , the Capitalize word
Congo
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agriculture
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agriculture considered highest
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water
sector
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sector
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the world
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water
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be considre
considre
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of humanity
sprede
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spread
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globally
saveings
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savings
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