The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line charts depict the number of New Zealand
imports
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from Australia and Japan in a decade.
Overall
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, both of the figures fluctuate over the period, with an upward trend for
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from Australia, and a downward trend for the other
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.
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from Australia started at 1000 million higher than from the other one in 1994 (4000 $),
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they grew remarkably until 1996. The
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dipped abruptly, reaching its all-time low in the middle of the period. after a series of fluctuations, the
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ended at 8000 million in 2004.
On the other hand
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,
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from Japan increased steadily in the first three years at just above 6000, and they dipped in 1999. In 2000 the
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increased again,
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not as much as its highest point in 1997.
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, it fell dramatically in 2001 to a lower number than in the first year
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and kept going down to its lowest for the rest of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words imports, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dipped" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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