The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line charts depict the number of New Zealand
imports
from Australia and Japan in a decade.
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Overall
, both of the figures fluctuate over the period, with an upward trend for Linking Words
imports
from Australia, and a downward trend for the other Use synonyms
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Imports
from Australia started at 1000 million higher than from the other one in 1994 (4000 $), Use synonyms
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they grew remarkably until 1996. The Linking Words
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dipped abruptly, reaching its all-time low in the middle of the period. after a series of fluctuations, the Use synonyms
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ended at 8000 million in 2004.
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On the other hand
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Imports
from Japan increased steadily in the first three years at just above 6000, and they dipped in 1999. In 2000 the Use synonyms
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increased again, Use synonyms
although
not as much as its highest point in 1997. Linking Words
Finally
, it fell dramatically in 2001 to a lower number than in the first yearLinking Words
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and kept going down to its lowest for the rest of the period.Remove the comma
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